My goal for the coming presentation is
to make all the audience interested in Johnny Weir, make them want to see his skating.
More concrete goal is not to speak too fast, because I always talk too fast when I am nervous.
The last thing is to be confident in the topic.
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Hi! 明けましておめでとう!
ReplyDeleteSo, Im here to post some feedback on your presentation.
I liked that you seemed truly passionate about what you were talking about. You were smiling (good facial expression) and there was excitement in the tone of your voice. Also, you repeated "I like him" numerous times which really emphasized the fact that you liked Johnny Weir. Just make sure you dont repeat it too much. :)
Things you could improve on...
-you shifted your weight from one feet to another. You might want to have less of that movement.
-the photographs on your visual presentation seemed unbalanced. Maybe it was done on purpose? (this is from my memory so forgive me if I'm wrong)
Overall, it was a really good presentation. I enjoy watching figure skating and it was nice to learn about a different skater, other than Japanese ones. So, thanks!